Sunday, April 25, 2010



Your glorious angel,
turns down on his wings,
to have the horns,
of the godfather,
whom treachery hails.

As i sublime,
in the thorns of time,
away from the kinship,
spurt my blood,
castigate my torso,
mitigate the luminous,
commend the obscure.
I am sour and raw,
with the games that sacred play,
Lift me high, with the pride
under fiends foresight.

i drift from the bondage,
hands off the Lord,
spill my guts,without rue,
to feel slimy and cursed.

Lay a chasm on me-
Holy dark Lord,
as I move on with devotion
in your awe.
dont let me moan,
as myself attempts to scorn,
to ridicule mankind .
utter the word of reverence,
to the blasphemy,
I count not ,
in the patronized,
but in the one distrusted.
the ill fates of light,
let my divinity be on fire,
and the ghastly sattire ,
testify pyrrhic vicotry.



4 comments:

^_^ boli said...

ur imagination is incomprehensible ......i wonder wht picture u hav in ur mind wen u write such things....nice nice......

Aditi said...

Di...wht propels you 2 rite such poems???
I mean d poem iz gr8 in terms of skills requird 4 d composition....
beautiful selection of words...

But on a deeper note, it praises d dark Lord, evil forces. it instilld an eerie feelin in me....

Jus waz curious to knw wht was d state of ur mind while ritin sumthin so cryptic and spooky?

Bt it succeeded in burgeoning dismay and gloominess.
Must say vry powerful poem!!!

Priyatakalra said...

@aditi- this is one thing that I wonder of too. if u ever notice all my posts are on the dark side.I m never able to write down towards the pure, and the good. I have tried to force myself to do that, but it doesnt turn out to b a masterpiece like these do.
always whenever my heart sits to pen down, i end up trying to grok this same problem.

Mayank said...

The Imagination and the words...and the phrasings...are just smooth and complementary to each other...
NAICE 1